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Broken Reaper: Chapter 10.

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Maka’s POV:
I was so happy to see Kid back in his body again, as he looked up at me with those shining golden eyes (that I loved so dearly), it just seemed like time had stopped in that moment as I smiled back down to him.
“Are you okay now Kid?” I asked as I wiped a tear from my eye.
“Yeah, I think so, my head hurts a little though,” Kid answered as he smiled back to me with a slight sigh.
“It’s no surprise that it does, what with all you've been through lately,” I stated.
“That’s true I guess,” Kid replied before a short silence fell between us, as we both just stayed there, gazing into each other’s eyes.
“Hey, Maka can I ask you something?” Kid broke the silence as he slightly looked away from me for a minute.
“Sure, what is it?” I asked as I looked to Kid with a curious look on my face.
“Will you be able to live on without me?” Kid asked with a serious look in his eyes.
My eyes widened and my smile faded, as I heard that question leave Kid’s lips, “What do you mean, why are you asking me something like that?” I asked with a worried look to him.
“Maka look at me, I can’t even move my legs, there’s no way I’ll be able to live on, my body’s too weak,” Kid explained with a slight sigh to me.
“No, it’s alright we can just have you in a wheelchair or something,” I tried to reason with Kid.
Kid just shook his head as I now could feel tears filling my eyes (and this time they weren't tears of joy, they tears of sadness again).
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Kid’s POV:
I had to do it, there was no other way. My body was becoming weaker and weaker by the second, as I lay there on Maka’s lap, I knew that my body was dying, and I sadly couldn't do anything to prevent it from doing so.
I couldn't feel anything from my waist downwards, my breathing was heavy and slow, my heart rate was slowing down, and my eye-lids were slowly closing. I couldn't hang on for much longer, I was going to die. For real this time. I was going to be gone, and not come back. So I had to say goodbye. I couldn't fight any longer, life was fading from me and it wasn't good for me to desperately cling to it, like I was trying to do now. I had to say my farewell to the girl that I had fallen for.
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Maka’s POV:
“I wanted to bring you back home to everyone,” I stated as tears started to run down my cheeks.
“I know,” Kid sighed to me as he reached his hand up and wiped away my tears.
“I’ll really miss you Kid,”
“I’ll really miss you too, Maka,” Kid replied as I could see him now starting to go pale again.
“I don’t want you to go, Kid, there must be another way. You’re a Reaper after all right?” I asked as I could feel my shoulders shaking slightly.
“I may be a Reaper, but that doesn't mean I can live on like this. My soul can’t last long without my body remember, and my body isn't strong enough to keep me alive for much longer. Looks like I may have left it alone for too long, I guess,” Kid explained as he chuckled slightly to me.
“But Kid I…..” I paused as I could feel more tears streaming down my cheeks.
“Hey maybe now you can finally answer that question that I asked you on the night that I first revealed myself to you,” Kid suggested, “If this plan doesn't work and I do die, will you be able to let me go this time?” Kid asked as he reminded me of his question that I had been avoiding to answer since the day he came to me.
I didn’t answer for a minute as I ran my fingers through Kid’s jet black and partly pure white hair, “I’ll try,” I finally answered with a small nod to Kid.
“That’s my girl,” Kid smiled to me as he stroked my tear-stained cheek.
“I love you, Kid,” I whispered as I smiled back to Kid slightly.
“I love you too….Maka…..Goodbye,” Kid whispered back to me, before his hand dropped from my cheek, his eyes slowly closed, and a few slight tears ran down his cheeks.
“Kid?” I called to Kid as I shook him hoping to wake him up. I got no response from him.
“Kid? KID!” I cried out his name, before I tightly hugged his now lifeless body close to me. He was beyond freezing, he was as pale as snow, he wasn't breathing, and his heart had stopped. It was no use now, Kid was gone, gone forever, never to return again. He really was dead this time.
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Writer’s POV:
Maka sat there on the concrete holding Kid’s lifeless body in her arms, as she sobbed into the Reaper’s chest. It then started to rain heavily as Maka was soon thoroughly soaked, while she shielded Kid’s body from the rain.
She finally lifted her head up as she gazed at Kid’s sleeping face, knowing that he would never wake up again. Maka lightly kissed Kid on the lips before she gently lay his head on the hard ground.
Maka stood up and slowly started to walk back home, as the rain poured down on her. She was just about to leave Wondrous Valley, when she turned round and looked back to Kid’s body for a minute. Her eyes widened as she watched the Reaper’s soul leave his body and disappear into the wind as it crossed over to the afterlife.
“Goodbye Kid,” Maka whispered with a slight smile, before she turned to leave again, ‘I’ll miss you forever,’
Subtitle: Our Last Goodbye.
 I DON'T OWN SOUL EATER OR ANY OF IT'S CHARACTERS K?
THIS IS JUST A FAN FIC MADE BY A FAN.
NO COPYRIGHT IS INTENDED!!
This fic follows the anime and not the manga.
The characters Lord Death, Stein, Spirit, Crona and Ragnarok will not be in any future chapters, since this fic mostly focuses on the main gang rather than all the other characters as well, sorry if this disappoints you in any way. :( 

I am so so sorry Sad dummy (well al least you all now know what that question was, and what Maka's answer to it was)

PLEASE BE AWARE THAT THIS FAN FIC IS QUITE SAD AND IF YOU END UP FEELING LIKE CRYING OR WANTING TO KILL ME FOR MAKING IT, I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND, AS I HAVE BEEN THERE MYSELF BEFORE!!!11 LOL XD
THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER, BUT THERE WILL BE AN EPILOGUE COMING SOON!!!!
Chapter 9: Broken Reaper: Chapter 9.
Epilogue: Broken Reaper: Epilogue.

You can now also read this on my FanFiction.net page: www.fanfiction.net/s/10977847/… (the stories are slightly different btw)
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