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Broken Reaper: Chapter 7.

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Maka’s POV:
“Kid! KID! Where are you?” I called out as I walked around my bedroom, “Kid,” I groaned as I was now starting to walk round in circles in the middle of my room, ‘Come on, it wasn't just my imagination yesterday, where is he?’ I asked myself with a sigh before I went to go sit on my bed and wait for a bit. But as soon as I turned round, there he stood, right in front of me.
“Boo,” Kid said with a smirk.
I jumped back, while a little sequel could be heard from my lips as I was startled by Kid suddenly appearing on my bed with that damn smirk on his face, “Kid,” I glared to him as I regained my composure, while he just smiled to me.
“Sorry,” Kid apologized with a slight chuckle.
“I thought you said once you revealed yourself in that form to me, you wouldn’t be able to leave my side,” I stated as I sighed again to the Reaper.
“I did. I can’t leave your side Maka, but that doesn't mean you can always see me, I am kinda like a ghost remember. It’s tiring for me to keep this form visible to you all the time,” Kid explained as he seemed to frown at me somewhat.
“Well you could not scare me like that when you do become visible to me,” I stated as I folded my arms across my chest and slightly turned away from Kid.
“Hey I said sorry,” Kid chuckled again, which made me kinda happy since I hate it when he frowns like that.
I just avoided his shining golden eyes as I sighed again slightly.
“So, you decided yet?” Kid asked as he changed the subject and sat forward on my bed.
“I don’t know Kid, something like this isn't exactly easy for me,” I answered as I was glad that he changed the subject, while I thought about the question that he asked me last night.
“I know it’s hard, but like I said last night, ‘the choice is yours,” Kid reminded me.
“I know, that’s what I don’t like about all this,” I replied with a slight groan as I sat beside Kid on my bed.
Kid just chuckled slightly as he wrapped his arms around me and rested his forehead against mine.
I smiled to him as I shivered slightly and blushed, “Kid, your forehead is freezing,” I whispered.
“Sorry I guess my skin is a little colder, while I'm in this ghost-like form,” Kid smiled as he pulled away from me slightly, much to my dismay.
“It’s alright,” I shrugged my shoulders as I just leaned more into Kid, “I love you Kid,” I sighed slightly as I closed my eyes.
Kid just smiled to me slightly as he started to stroke my hair.
Last night after Kid had explained everything to me, and I agreed to help (and hopefully save) him, he asked me something, something I could never even think about answering at first. He asked me, ‘If I…
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Writer’s POV:
“Is Maka any better today?” Liz asked Soul as the two weapons were sitting on the sofa in the lounge of Soul and Maka’s apartment (Soul has called her over again to see if she can give him any more advice or help).
“Well she’s still not eating that well, and her sleeping is still off. But she seems less sad now, she doesn't seem lost anymore, and she hasn't tried to attack me or hurt herself since the day before yesterday,” Soul explained as the two were talking about a certain Scythe Meister.
“Well that’s good than right?” Liz asked with a slight smile.
“I guess, but something weird happened yesterday, something really weird,” Soul stated as he thought about what had happened yesterday.
“Weird how?” Liz asked.
“Well Maka was in her room like normal, while I was sitting here watching T.V. But then I suddenly heard her screaming and immediately ran to her room, thinking that she was hurting herself again. But when I got there she was fine, but she looked like she had just seen a ghost of some kind. She kept pointing at her bedroom window, and said that there was something there, but I couldn't see anything, so I think it was probably just her mind playing tricks on her or something,” Soul explained to the other weapon.  
“And how has she been since then?” Liz asked after taking a short pause to think for a moment.
“She seems okay, not really happy, but content I guess. Also last night she was finally able to have a good night’s sleep without being woken by those nightmares that she’s been having,” Soul stated with a slight sigh.
“Hmm…So what exactly are you asking me to help you with, if nothing much has changed?” Liz asked.
“Well, Maka for some strange reason, has started talking to herself,” Soul stated.
Liz looks surprised slightly to Soul, “What do you mean?” She asked.
“Come on,” Soul said as he stood up from the sofa and lead Liz to where his Meister’s bedroom was.
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Maka’s POV:
“Are you certain you’ll live through this?” I asked Kid as I was back to walking round in circles in the middle of my bedroom, while Kid was still sitting on my bed.
“I told you I'm not sure if it’ll work or not, okay?” Kid replied to me as he sat forward on my bed.
“Why can’t you just do it for yourself? You've got to be powerful enough to at least do this,” I asked.
“Maka you know I can’t just go back into my body, it’s impossible even for a Reaper,” Kid reminded me as I just sighed and turned to look at the mirror that was hanging up on the wall opposite my bed.
“Kid, how come I'm the only one that can see you?” I asked as I looked to my reflection in the mirror, and sighed when I noticed that Kid didn’t have one.
“Well maybe it’s because you were always meant to be the only one that could save me,” Kid stated as I just walked up to the mirror, and rested my hand on where Kid’s reflection was meant to be.
“Maybe,” I replied with another sigh.
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Writer’s POV:
“She’s been like this all last night, and this morning,” Soul stated as he and Liz stood at Maka’s bedroom door, listing to the young Scythe Meister mumbling to herself slightly (the door’s closed, so Soul and Liz can’t make out what Maka is saying, and it just sounds like mumbles to them).
“This is strange. Can I go in and talk to her?” Liz asked as she looked to Soul.
“Of course, go right in,” Soul answered with a nod, before he turned and left to leave the two girls alone.
Liz took a deep breath before she knocked on the door lightly and then waited for an answer.
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Maka’s POV:
“Soul?” I questioned as I heard someone knocking on my bedroom door and looked to it for a minute.
“No, it’s Liz,” I heard a familiar voice reply to me.
“Oh…..Umm…” I looked to Kid as I wasn't sure if I should let her in or not.
“What are you looking at me for?” Kid asked as he slightly glanced to the door, and then looked back at me.
I just sighed slightly before I called back out to Liz, “Come in,” I stated as I sat on my bed and waited for Liz to walk into my room.
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Writer’s POV:
Liz grabbed hold of the door handle and turned it as she slowly opened the door, and peeked into the room, “Hey,” Liz heard Maka call out to her as she turned and smiled to the other girl.
“Heya, you okay?” Liz asked as she walked into the room and closed the door behind her.
“I've had better days, I guess,” Maka answered with a slight smile, before she glanced to Kid and sighed slightly, ‘Looks like Kid was telling the truth when he said that Liz couldn't see him,’ Maka thought as she looked back at Liz.
“We all have,” Liz smiled back as she was happy that Maka seemed much less sad now, “You seem a lot better now though,” Liz stated as she walked over to Maka’s bed and sat beside her.
“You think so?” Maka asked, not really noticing much difference in herself.
“Yeah, you’re smiling more now,” Liz stated.
“Yeah, I guess that’s true,” Maka sighed slightly as she glanced to Kid again for a minute, “I'm sorry about scratching you the other day,” Maka apologized as she looked back to Liz, and saw the slight red marks that were still left on the weapon’s left cheek from the other day.
“It’s alright. You didn’t break any skin, and it’s not like you really meant to hurt me, right?” Liz stated as she felt the red marks on her left cheek with two fingers.
“Right,” I nodded as I turned away from Liz slightly, “So why did come round here today?” Maka asked, changing the subject.
“Well Soul called me round, he told me that since yesterday, you've started talking to yourself,” Liz explained.
“Oh….Really?” Maka replied with a nervous smile to Liz, ‘Damn it, why did he tell her?’ Maka cursed under her breath in a slight whisper.
“Maka, Soul and I heard you earlier, we couldn't really make out what you were saying, so we thought you were just mumbling to yourself,” Liz stated.
“I'm afraid I don’t know what you’re talking about,” Maka lied as she turned away from Liz again.
Maka looked to Kid wondering if she should tell her about him being here. Kid just shook his head to Maka, “She can’t see me or hear me, she won’t believe you Maka,” Kid stated as he seemed sad about the fact that his own weapon couldn't see or hear him, even though they were in the same room together.
Maka just nodded to Kid, before she turned back to Liz, “Maka listen I know that-
“I think you should go now,” Maka cut Liz off as she turned away from Liz.
“Are you sure,” Liz asked now with a concerned look on her face.
Maka just nodded as she hugged her knees to her chest.
“Okay,” Liz nodded back with a slight smile, before she stood and left Maka’s bedroom.
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Writer’s POV:
“Soul?” Liz called out to the other weapon as she walked back into the lounge.
“Hey, how is she?” Soul asked as he turned to the sound of Liz calling his name, and smiled when he saw that Liz hadn't been attacked by his Meister this time.
“I think I must have said something to make her mad. She threw me out,” Liz stated with a slight smile to Soul, as she glanced back to Maka’s bedroom for a minute.
“Well that’s better than attacking you like she did last time, I guess,” Soul replied.
Liz just nodded as she looked back to Soul and smiled to him again slightly.
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Maka’s POV:
“Sorry Maka,” Kid apologized to me soon after Liz left my room.
“What are you apologizing for?” I asked as I looked back to Kid.
“For putting you through all that stuff, I should have found a way to reveal myself to you sooner,” Kid explained as he cursed under his breath.
“It’s alright, all that matters is the fact that you’re here now,” I stated with a smile to Kid.
Kid looked to me surprised with wide eyes for a minute, “After all, I can still possibly save you right?” I asked.
Kid just smiled as he nodded to me.
‘I promise that I’ll save you Kid, and that I’ll bring you back home to everyone,’ I thought as I leaned into Kid more and rested my head on his shoulder, “I’ll save you no matter what Kid, I promise,” I whispered to Kid with a smile.
Kid just smiled back to me as he kissed me on my forehead and gently started to stroke my hair again.
Subtitle: Keep Me Your Secret.
 I DON'T OWN SOUL EATER OR ANY OF IT'S CHARACTERS K?
THIS IS JUST A FAN FIC MADE BY A FAN.
NO COPYRIGHT IS INTENDED!!
This fic follows the anime and not the manga.
The characters Lord Death, Stein, Spirit, Crona and Ragnarok will not be in any future chapters, since this fic mostly focuses on the main gang rather than all the other characters as well, sorry if this disappoints you in any way. :(

It's chapter 7, and what is that question that Kid asked Maka last night I wonder. (I know this is up a day earlier than it normally is, but I'm a little busy with something else tomorrow, so I wanted to finish this and put it up today instead, enjoy :D). 

PLEASE BE AWARE THAT THIS FAN FIC IS QUITE SAD AND IF YOU END UP FEELING LIKE CRYING OR WANTING TO KILL ME FOR MAKING IT, I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND, AS I HAVE BEEN THERE MYSELF BEFORE!!!11 LOL XD
CHAPTER 8 COMING SOON!!!!
Chapter 6: Broken Reaper: Chapter 6.
Chapter 8: Broken Reaper: Chapter 8.

You can now also read this on my FanFiction.net page: www.fanfiction.net/s/10977847/… (the stories are slightly different btw)
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Errors1007's avatar
WHHAAAAAA!!!

KID?! Y U NOT
SAY I LOVE YOU BACK TO MAKA?

Nut overall, THIS IS FANTASTIC! FABULOUS XD
I can't wait for the next chapter and I have been waiting for this!!